Some Thoughts on Murakami’s Men Without Women

I was gifted this collection for Christmas and I’m glad I was. I’ve been aware of Murakami for a long time (and I’ve owned some of his novels for a long time), but just never got around to giving him a serious go. This collection was a great way in to his work, I think.

As usual when I look at a collection of short stories, I’ve taken the #onetweetreviews approach; I’ll post my raw notes, lightly edited, below the break, and then will develop my thoughts a bit after that.


Drive my Car

This story made me think about pacifism, about what it means to be capable of doing someone a great harm, and wanting to, and not doing it.

Yesterday

For anyone who has ever found themselves playing a role in someone else’s relationship: this one’s for you.

An Independent Organ

Men will go to any lengths to justify their behaviour.

Scheherazade

This is some hyperfixation.

Kind

The repressed always returns.

Samsa in Love

A fun twist on a classic – it is weird having a body, isn’t it?

Men Without Women

The strangest story in the collection, with the most savage hurt at the centre of it.


I realised while I was reading these stories that, recently, I’ve not read many conventional stories where men and women worry about their careers, love each other, hurt each other. In fact the context I can most easily recall that does include that stuff is the occasional murder mystery I read. My habits are my habits, I’m trying not to worry about them. It might have reached the surface of my mind because I read about half of this collection on a train moving away from someone I love (but towards someone else I love).

Love and pain are felt in so many exquisite degrees, right? This collection is about the many big and small ways that we disappoint people, are disappointed, how those feelings linger. I’d point particularly to Yesterday in this collection. Kids playing at adult games are liable to get hurt in ways that are deeper than they notice at first, and this story captures that feeling exactly.

Again, I haven’t “properly” read Murakami yet, but I knew I’d probably like him. His main concerns, as I understand them (apart from love), are The Beatles, Cats, and Jazz, and that means I’m likely to get on with him. They’re all present here.

And Kafka, I guess. An Independent Organ is a devastatingly sad riff on A Hunger Artist, and Samsa in Love is a playful look at The Metamorphosis that supposes, just what if?… Gregor Samsa awoke to find himself turned in to a man. Terrifying, I know.

Shecherazade is another standout, elevating pillow talk to high art and again riffing on a classic, The One Thousand and One Nights. Most of these stories revolve around male desire, so one that tries to centre a woman’s experience is welcome. It’s also totally unhinged, but all these stories are, in their own way, and maybe that’s Murakami, but maybe that’s also just how love makes you.

The translation duties are shared between Philip Gabriel and Ted Goosen; they do an admirable job of keeping the voice consistent in these stories. The narrators all come from different backgrounds, but they are also clearly of a piece, and this helps strengthen the theme, I think. It’s quite a spare voice, matter-of-fact. This book taking its name from a collection of stories by Ernest Hemingway shouldn’t be lost on you.

I think I’ll have to move up reading one of his novels. I have copies of The Wind-Up Bird Chronicle, Norwegian Wood, and Kafka on the Shore, I think, somewhere. Would you start with one of those, or would you try something else?

Some Thoughts on Viriconium

M. John Harrison is one of those writers that I knew on paper I should fall in love with but hadn’t properly tried. Up until last year I’d been a big fan of his blog and his tweets but hadn’t read much of his fiction other than The Centauri Device. Then I got gifted a copy of Wish I Was Here and couldn’t help but devour it over the course of a couple of afternoons. (I reviewed it here.)

I was sold on M. John Harrison, so I decided to finally get started with the Fantasy Masterworks omnibus of Viriconium stories that I bought myself last year.

It’s an incredibly varied body of work with a lot to offer, and that asks a lot of questions. At no point did Harrison condescend to my expectations. Not every story hits, but that’s as much down to my reading comprehension as it is anything else, I think. I imagine these stories would be similarly rich on re-reading as Gene Wolfe’s New Sun books are supposed to be.

As has become my habit with these collections and anthologies I end taking notes story by story. I’ll post those raw notes, slightly edited, below the break, and then continue my discussion after.


Viriconium Knights

Why do I get the feeling that the tapestry is obliquely showing me important plot points?

The Pastel City

Like a heroic fantasy adventure inside a T.S. Eliot poem. The vibe here is impeccable. Harrison really goes out of his way to portray a world being scoured by a wind only moving in one direction; capital T Time, before pulling the rug and demonstrating that even at the end of Time, change is possible, is in fact the only constant. I think writing a fantasy novel about a swordsman who refuses to name his sword is hilarious. I just love the way he writes – I love the vocabulary, I love the odd choices of words. Gene Wolfe uses a similar technique in The Book of the New Sun. If you want to make it strange, writing about it strangely will go a long way.

Lord of Misrule

You don’t have to go to the end of time to meet sad people full of memories.

Strange Great Sins

Strange indeed. Is there a greater sin than not becoming yourself?

A Storm of Wings

Even sadder and more elegiac than usual. I miss tegeus-Cromis. So do a lot of people. The world, failing to end, undergoes a mutation. Filled with weird architecture you’ll struggle to imagine.

The Dancer from the Dance

Weird things happening on the heath.

The Luck in the Head

I could bound myself in a nutshell, and count myself king of infinite space, were it not that I have bad dreams.

The Lamia & Lord Cromis

Fate exists and you could not possibly guess at it.

In Viriconium

We spend more time in Viriconium than in any other story, and what a run down, claustrophobic place it is.

A Young Man’s Journey to Viriconium

You always suspected that Viriconium could be anywhere or anywhen.


I noticed as I was reading these stories that I was tracing the dying earth subgenre of SFF backwards. Or science fantasy, if you wanna call it that. I read The Book of the New Sun a few years ago and had never read anything like it, but knew you could follow it back to Jack Vance and The Dying Earth. The thread runs through Viriconium.

Opening this collection with Viriconium Knights is a smart move, I think. It drops you right it and disorients the hell out of you in terms of the setting, the characters, the way people view the world and how they speak to each other. It’s a concentrated hit. I didn’t understand the significance of the metal bird at the time, but having read Wolfe and been annoyed with myself at totally missing the significance of Dr. Talos’ play in Claw of the Conciliator, I was primed when the old man showed Ignace Retz the tapestry. Re-reading it quickly as I write this, it is a terrible echo, ever so sad; the first time I just nodded my head and knew what to expect.

I don’t know if Harrison arranged the stories or if that choice was made by an editor, but I think it’s significant that the stories from Viriconium Nights were broken up and arranged around the three novels, and not put in as their own block in the same order as published. Viriconium Knights would have one effect reading it after tegeus-Cromis has departed the stage, a nice little callback, do you remember that character? He was swell, wasn’t he? Placing it here, first, an echo of a thing that hasn’t happened yet, deprives you of that feeling of warmth and just highlights the disconnect, the instability of time and identity within these stories.

If The Pastel City was the only Viriconium thing then it would stand very well on its own as a great novel and fine addition to the genre. It’s an epic adventure story that subverts as many ideas and tropes inherent to epic adventure stories as it can, and even has some horror elements. (Thinking about it a lot of these stories have horror elements.) It’s a quest narrative where the quest only obliquely gets fulfilled and the hero is a master swordsman who refuses to name his sword and prefers to think of himself as a poet. The novel is written like the novelist prefers to think of himself as a poet. I mentioned it above, that using weird, archaic language can create that sense of strangeness.

(This extends even to the colours. I learned so many new words for colours reading these stories. Make it new!)

I just came across (here) an old essay of Harrison’s on the idea of worldbuilding. I think this quote is particularly edifying;

Worldbuilding numbs the reader’s ability to fulfil their part of the bargain

Harrison is writing a kind of post-structuralist fantasy, writing a constantly shifting city into existence by relying on the constant shift of language, asking the reader to do a lot of the work knowing full well every reader “reads” a different text into existence.

In Wish I Was Here, Harrison talks a lot about T.S. Eliot – I thought as I was reading the Viriconium stories that it was like a fantasy novel set inside an Eliot poem, but it goes deeper than that imagery. Harrison is as disobliging as Eliot. Eliot expects you to be familiar with so much stuff outside of his text to be able to fully grok it, Harrison does likewise. Harrison even quotes directly from The Waste Land without citing it, a few times actually, in much the same way Eliot doesn’t let you know when he’s copped something from Fraser, or Shakespeare. It’s poetry, innit.

Which is all to say that I adored The Pastel City, that if you were writing a fantasy novel just for me, just to appeal to my own interests and predilections, you would write The Pastel City.

The short stories that in this collection begin to serve as connective tissue are even more oblique, and I’m going to have to re-read them, I think, to have the same relationship with them that I developed with the novels. Some of the imagery starts repeating, like the Mari Lwyd.

A Storm of Wings is an odd one. In a world that is kind of already post-apocalyptic, but has reached a kind of equilibrium, what does the end of the world look like? It’s something totally alien, totally unimaginable, and it’s far enough in the future that our hero, tegeus-Cromis, has passed, and we must deal with it ourselves. A lot of the characters are heard aloud wishing for the return of their poet-cum-swordmaster in a way that probably echoes what the general reader is thinking. Instead we’re given; a rogue, a person who has been reawakened after millennia and is losing their grip on reality, a person who has been reawakened after millennia and *has* lost their grip on reality, and Tomb the dwarf, so that at least we’re not totally alienated, because despite me using words like “post-structuralist” to describe these stories, they are still stories, and Harrison knows what he is doing.

Harrison isn’t too arch to give us what we want, he just isn’t gonna do it in a straightforward way. The Lamia & Lord Cromis is another quest narrative, because that’s the kind of context that tegeus-Cromis belongs in. Lords of his house are fated to have to find and slay a rare beast, the eponymous Lamia. He does, eventually, do this, but it doesn’t bring him the fulfilment he expects, and I think him losing a ring in the same swamp that he loses one of Queen Jane’s in The Pastel City is interesting. tegeus-Cromis is directly engaging with his fate in this story, but not in the way he thinks.

(I just want to point out that even in giving us what we want, Harrison doesn’t. tegeus-Cromis spends a lot of The Pastel City brooding over his dead sister, in what I imagine might be a reference to Elric, but Harrison doesn’t use the prequel story to show us that loss, or bring tegeus-Cromis’ sister on stage for cheap dramatic irony. Remarkable restraint.)

By this point, and leading into the next novel, I was really noticing what Harrison wasn’t showing us, what he refuses to explain. There is plenty of advanced technology like airships, power armour, and laser swords, that he doesn’t explain, and doesn’t have the characters theorise about in-text either. The stuff just is, like stuff in real life just is. The way he describes the radiation from these technologies is cool (again, he’s not *against* the reader, he’s just not doing it all for them), they give off motes of white and purple light. In Viriconium, the last Viriconium novel, has a plague that is never explained, only its effects shown, that of sapping the will, the creative energy, the life force, of the city.

I actually had a moment reading this one where I thought, “I wonder what it’s like to live through a plage?” It took me a few moments, but I realised I had. And it had had a similar sapping effect on my energies, my life force. I know some people managed to have incredibly creative quarantines; I felt like such a dick because I didn’t. On paper it sounded perfect. My wages were getting (mostly) paid, and I had to stay home. The perfect time to work on that novel. I ground away at it and just felt miserable. None of it came easy. I kept a journal on and off. I’m glad I tried to keep myself busy and have some material to show for it, but it’s hard to look back at it as a particularly fruitful period.

(“Why won’t Harrison explain the plague?” I wondered to myself, as if anyone ever fully explained COVID.)

The protagonist, Ashlyme, a painter, has a friend who is also an artist and who is suffering from the plague. Ashlyme recognises his friend, Audsley King, as a great painter, but struggles to understand her recent work or why she choses to wallow in the plague zone instead of getting out and lapping up the adulation she surely deserves. Audsley has no interest in the praise of people she does not respect. This friction animatesthe whole story and the plague is just a backdrop. The stuff with the secret police, and the twins; I’m sure they represent the city, but otherwise am having trouble reconciling that subplot with the story as whole. Which might be the point. Art has contradictions and unreconcilable parts. Does some of this speak to Harrison’s attitude to the Viriconium stories as a whole? I think so, at least a bit.

The last story, A Young Man’s Journey to Viriconium, is a gear shift, set as it is in our world, among our people, some of whom have been to Viriconium before, some of whom want to visit for the first time. It’s an interesting contrast – what makes one story set in grimy cafes with a cast of weird people a fantasy and what makes another story set in grimy cafes among weird people not a fantasy story? Is it just the names? Some pretty weird names in this one, but then some of it takes place in York. Is Viriconium a place or a state of mind? I don’t know how I feel about this story, haven’t come to a nice conclusion. I just have questions and ideas I’ll be happy to think about every now and again until I eventually re-read these stories and maybe glean a bit more.

I’ve always enjoyed the modernist bent in SFF, the New Wave stuff, the exploration of inner space. Having read this and The Book of the New Sun, I’m thinking about how some of those other modernist ideas and ways of working leaked into the fantasy side of SFF, as a way of providing a kind of jungle gym for the reader’s mind. I came away from Viriconium with a lot of things to think about and a huge list of vocabulary to look up.

I love a book where I can feel myself becoming a better writer as I read it. The way Harrison constructs his worlds and stories looks so maximalist, and on closer inspection is so deliberate and restrained. Sometimes there is an impulse to explain every cool idea you have, and it is so satisfying to be trusted as a reader to fill in gaps, to be left space enough for a world to grow in me. Viriconium is ever changing in the stories, and is ever changing in my own mind and in the minds of everyone else who reads it.

Viriconium!

First Contact: Some Thoughts on The Caltraps of Time

The Caltraps of Time is a collection of short stories by David I. Masson, all of which (in the 2012 SF Masterworks edition, anyway) appeared in the British New Wave SF magazine New Worlds.

I think the nature of consciously writing in a different, experimental mode, means that you’ll get some duds, because of course not every experiment is going to succeed. Caltraps is a record of Masson’s experiments. Most of them are okay, and one of them is good enough to justify the whole collection.

People have a lot of different reasons for creating art. Expressing yourself is a fine and good aim, but if you’re really honest with yourself, some of the impulse will be rooted in wanting to make a contribution to humanity, in wanting to be remembered. Sure there are people whose entire oeuvre is capital A Art1 , but there are more people who create one really good thing that cements them. All you have to do is write one really good guitar riff, one really great story, one memorable character.

Which makes it sound easy. I know it isn’t. What do you think I’ve been trying to do?

It is time for me to be entirely honest with you. I read the first half of this collection a few years ago, during COVID, and then dropped it. Recently I’m trying to finish off books I’ve already started rather than starting and dropping more new ones, so I picked it back up, and I remembered that I dropped Caltraps (now that’s an image) because there’s a story written entirely in Olde English.

We’ll get to that, but in the spirit of fairness, I’ll post my notes from the first few stories verbatim as well. I have no memory of them otherwise and don’t want to re-read them. This was around the time I started taking more notes on my reading and particularly would write mini reviews of short stories as I worked through a collection (like my notes on Ballard’s complete fiction, volumes 1 and 2).


Lost Ground

A messy story with some great imagery. A bit Ballard-lite. Manages to convey some weighty emotions.

Not So Certain

Whereof we cannot speak we must remain silent.

Mouth of Hell

What a hole.


On to the second half, which I just finished reading and am pretty sure is the stronger half, even if one of the stories wears a bit thin after a few pages and just keeps going.


A Two-Timer

Hilarious title. A fun time travel travel caper, but the middle third drags. SF works by making things strange, of course, but page after page of a guy talking in Olde English about what a fright a horseless chariot is gets a bit old.

The Transfinite Choice

A terrifying answer to the colonialist logic inherent in a lot of stories about alternate dimensions. Reminded me a bit of the Philip K. Dick novel Cantata-140.

Psychosmosis

You need to be able to name the dead to keep living, yourself.

Traveller’s Rest

Heart-wrenching time-travel story. War never changes.


Oh yeah, this is definitely the stronger half, but with qualifications

A Two-Timer is a fun story wrapped around a dull exercise. This is what I mean about experimental fiction not always hitting. It’s a great idea, right? If I’d had it I’d have written it, and I doubt I have the chops to pull it off half as authentically as Masson. The idea: a time travel story where we get the perspective of someone from the 17th Century who has mistakenly travelled to the mid-20th, written entirely in language authentic to that person’s original era. The guy learning to use the time machine is lots of fun. The guy getting into trouble in the 20th Century before returning home; also fun. The middle section where he goes on and on and on at length writing about modern technology in Olde English? You expect a bit of it, sure, but it’s just too long and too dull.

Now The Transfinite Choice, that’s good, tight SF. He has a great idea but leaves enough for you to figure out that it doesn’t outstay its welcome (see previous story). Masson lays out the terrible logic our society functions under. We may well discover time travel, but we would immediately use it to try and solve “problems” that we have decided are ineradicable-because-unprofitable to fix, like overpopulation. I won’t spoil any more if you haven’t read it, but this is a great story.

Psychosmosis I find it difficult to talk about, not because there isn’t anything to say, but just because I’m starting to notice that, having had a fair bit of grief heaped on me in the last few years, I will read a story as being about grief if there’s even the slightest hint of it. This story, about refusing to name those you’ve lost in an attempt to carry on living in a world that is empty without them, is almost too on the nose.

Traveller’s Rest is the really great piece, the one that means that most of the rest of his stuff will stay in print along with it. I don’t want to ruin the story for you, but once you’re halfway in and get the gist you’ll know what’s going to happen anyway. There are some really great works about how war and conflict alienate you from the people you love, the society you’re protecting. Masson uses the relativity of time as a metaphor for that alienation in this deft, perfectly paced story that ends with a really ferocious sense of irony and futility. This mines the same vein as Inception and The Forever War.

Laying it all out like that, it’s really clear how these stories fit in to the New Wave. They’re all about the relativity of time, or the relativity of perceptions of time and space, how our inner worlds affect our outer worlds. If you’re into that kind of thing (I am), then this collection is definitely worth reading, but if you’re not sure, read Traveller’s Rest first to get the vibe (here’s a link to it at Lightspeed Magazine).


1 (although I’m reminded recently of seeing a rash of Bob Dylan records turn up in a charity shop window near me. All the really good ones (there was a copy of Highway 61 Revisited) went quickly. The last one left was a copy of Nashville Skyline. It’s still there.

First Contact: Ursula K. Le Guin’s The Compass Rose

I was thinking that The Wind’s Twelve Quarters, Le Guin’s previous collection (collected in the same 2015 Gollancz SF Masterworks paperback and reviewed by me here), was the stronger one, but reviewing these notes I’m not so sure. There are some masterpiece level stories here too (The New Atlantis, Two Delays on the Northern Line, Sur), but the weakest stories (Small Change, I think), aren’t as weak as the ones in the previous collection, and there aren’t as many of them. Hm. 

Both collections make a good omnibus together. You can clearly see Le Guin’s developing thought as well as her recurring motifs (deliberately choosing marginalised perspectives, the figure of the artist/scientist out on the fringe). I read this collection shortly after experiencing a personal loss so some of the stories here that touch on that subject loom larger to me that they might otherwise have, and brought me a lot of comfort. 

I read Two Delays on the Northern Line shortly before having the experience I wrote about in this piece, and it was that combination that encouraged me to write it down. 

Reading these short stories just confirmed to me that Le Guin is one of my favourite writers and possibly my favourite SFF writer along with PKD and Ballard (don’t make me choose). I really do need to re-read The Dispossessed, Always Coming Home looks really interesting as well, there’s more short fiction I need to get, and also Earthsea: I own them, just need to read them.  

I was reading these Le Guin collections around the time I started keeping a commonplace book. I ended up underlining, highlighting, and commenting a lot in my paperback, and copied a fair bit out, because just like in The Wind’s Twelve Quarters, The Compass Rose is full of writing that captures really delicate feelings that I couldn’t describe, so I won’t, but here are some quotes that stuck out to me. 

“When the brandy is gone I expect I will stuff this notebook into the bottle and put the top on tight and leave it on a hillside somewhere between here and Salem. I like to think of it being lifted up little by little by the water, and rocking, and going out to the dark sea.”

Ursula K. Le Guin, The Wind’s Twelves Quarters and the Compass Rose, Gollancz 2015, p.g 331, from the story The New Atlantis

“But it was good to have an artist. It was human. It was like Earth, wasn’t it?”

Ursula K. Le Guin, The Wind’s Twelves Quarters and the Compass Rose, Gollancz 2015, p.g 447, from the story The Eye Altering

“But then the backside of heroism is often rather sad; women and servants know that. They know also that the heroism may be no less real for that. But achievement is smaller than men think. What is large is the sky, the earth, the sea, the soul.”    

Ursula K. Le Guin, The Wind’s Twelves Quarters and the Compass Rose, Gollancz 2015, p.g 551, from the story Sur

Like I mentioned in my previous review, this was intended to be a #onetweetreviews style thing, and still kind of is, I just haven’t posted it on Twitter. I think this format works, or at least, it works for me, and I’ve seen other SFF blogs take similar approached when reviewing collections and anthologies. If you have any thoughts, please let me know in the comments.


The Author of the Acacia Seeds (1974)

What is this, a short story for ants?

The New Atlantis (1975)

We’ll be here soon, I think; under a fascist yoke while the world melts. Just read it, you can here https://www.lightspeedmagazine.com/fiction/the-new-atlantis/

Schrödinger’s Cat (1974)

More like Schrödinger’s dog in a hot car.

Two Delays on the Northern Line (1979)

A story that captures how deeply weird grief is, and also the best attempt I’ve ever seen to capture the idea that “when God closes a door he opens a window” in humanist terms.  

SQ (1978) 

I think every writer has to do a story sceptical of the mental health profession. 

Small Change (1981)

Grief is weird. 

The First Report of the Shipwrecked Foreigner (1978)

In which Le Guin artfully demonstrates what history is while taking multiple swipes at Thomas Mann. 

The Diary of the Rose (1976)

What if Nurse Ratched had a heart?

The White Donkey (1980)

God donkey is such a great turn of phrase. 

The Phoenix (1982)

Egghead likes his booky-wook. 

Intracom (1974)

Science Fiction language is a great way to get across how odd pregnancy is. 

The Eye Altering (1974)

I love that Le Guin uses SF to explore what the role of the artist might be in a radically different context. Perfect example of how to use the medium. 

Mazes (1975)

Conjured a mental image very much like a Tool music video, which is an achievement. 

The Pathways of Desire (1979)

Is all that we see or seem

But a dream within a dream?

Gwilan’s Harp (1977)

There is art and there is life. You can’t always make your life art, but you can have art in your life.

If you’ve ever had a headstock break on your Gibson, read this story. 

Malheur County (1979)

We are born alone and die alone, and in the meantime should learn to live with ourselves. 

The Water is Wide (1976)

I don’t get it, apart from the idea that the afterlife is probably very confusing. 

The Wife’s Story (1982) 

Something of Angela Carter about this, and also another of Le Guin’s commitments: whose perspective would we not normally get?

Some Approaches to the Problem of the Shortage of Time (1979)

A story in the form of a scientific report, all about the relativity of time? Very funny, and the most Ballardian Le Guin story I’ve read. 

Sur (1982)

Le Guin writes the most positive, hopeful, “but what if…?” stories I have ever read, and tinges them with exquisite melancholy.

James’ End of Year 2021 Reading Roundup Spectacular

I expected the pandemic to take a toll on me mentally but what I wasn’t prepared for was the last half year. It’s been like living in The Twilight Zone. Covid has been so clearly out of control for so long, and we’ve had to get up and go back to work and pretend everything is normal while being numb to a good 100+ people a day dying from a disease there is no longer any political will to control. I want to see my friends? Should I? The government says it’s ok. But I think the government should tell me to stay home on account of the deadly virus. Well, they’re saying you should stay home but you can go outside if you want to. Well, I work frontline customer service anyway, so I get exposed plenty whether I want to or not. And I am youngish and healthyish and have had three shots. But what about other people who can’t or won’t. And…

I just looked back on my end of year 2020 post to see if I had any tom fool ideas about what I would get done in 2021, and I didn’t, and thank past James for that. I am normally caught in a war between past James and future James, but this time past James has done me a solid. I got a bit of reading done this year, and I’ve put together some blog posts and journalled a bit, but otherwise I’ve laid low. What else has there been to do? I travelled a tiny bit to see a friend’s new house back in May when it was allowed, I saw some friends who were visiting family just before Christmas when it was still allowed and probably shouldn’t have been.

I expected the pandemic to take a toll on me mentally but what I wasn’t prepared for was the last half year. It’s been like living in The Twilight Zone. Covid has been so clearly out of control for so long, and we’ve had to get up and go back to work and pretend everything is normal while being numb to a good 100+ people a day dying from a disease there is no longer any political will to control. I want to see my friends? Should I? The government says it’s ok. But I think the government should tell me to stay home on account of the deadly virus. Well, they’re saying you should stay home but you can go outside if you want to. Well, I work frontline customer service anyway, so I get exposed plenty whether I want to or not. And I am youngish and healthyish and have had three shots. But what about other people who can’t or won’t. And…

It’s been unpleasant. I feel like for a long time all I’ve been doing is muddling along. I suspect most everyone feels the same. I have been trying to treat people with this in mind, but my fuse is a lot shorter and my mood a lot quicker to drop than it was, I’m sure. 

But it’s not all bad. I read 57 books this year! Probably 58 if I manage to sneak Tade Thompson’s Far from the Light of Heaven in under the wire, which I might, because it’s bloody good and I don’t want to put it down. Tade Thompson is a seriously good novelist. 

Highlights, highlights. I consult my notes because my brain is fogged over. 180k odd cases today and they still don’t want to do anything? How do you get your head around that and carry on? There was going to be another sentence to end this paragraph that slipped out of my head. I cannot regrasp it. I can! I’d stop looking at the news but then I suspect the world would end and I wouldn’t know about it. Maybe it already is. Maybe it already has. 

I read some Cioran recently so excuse the melodrama. A Short History of Decay was almost distended with misery. The Problem with Being Born almost revelled in its control of the length of every sentence and thought. A Short History finds itself circling back and going on and on. Not unlike someone you might know. 

I finally finished The Odyssey this year and am glad I did. It’s one of those things I feel will give me a better grasp on everything else. I am slowly plodding my way through The Iliad as well. This is all part of a very long form reading project for me. I’d like to have read the Bible, Shakespeare, and Homer. I feel like those three things would stand me in good stead. I don’t know why. Inside me there’s still a literature student, somewhere. 

I’ve been intending to read more SF short stories because I enjoy them and also because I enjoy writing them. To this end, if you want to write well, you should familiarise yourself as much as you can with the canon of what you’re writing. A couple of standouts include James Tiptree Jr.’s Her Smoke Rose up Forever and the first volume of J.G. Ballard’s short stories. Tiptree is one of those writers that just seems to have an innate knowledge of how to push the buttons of the human heart. Every single one of her stories, at least of the one’s I’ve read so far, will turn you inside out, and have you radically questioning your perspective on some aspect of human existence. Ballard I’ve just always had a soft spot for. He’s got his themes and ideas and they’re pretty good, but it’s honestly the style I like and I loved how evident it was even in his earlier SF. All the Vermillion Sands stories that I’ve read so far have been marvellous. I am looking forward to the second volume and more of his experimental stories. The first Ballard I read was The Atrocity Exhibition (because I read Naked Lunch and went ooo more please), so I am anticipating more good times. 

I read a few more Maigret and Poirot stories but by about February I was really ready for something different. I needed to at least attempt to throw the comfort blanket off. Like I said, Twilight Zone. Go out and try be normal; please be mindful that everything is all messed up. Stay alert and control the virus. Was that this year? My sense of time is FUBAR. 

SFF wise I read some very good novels. Some more of Banks’ Culture stuff which is always a delight. I also read the first two novels in The Book of the New Sun which I am loving but I am sure I am not understanding. I have the last two and will read them next year. I also read the second and third Dune novels. Lots of fun.

I read the first three Hannibal novels in a week. At least the first two are masterpieces. Good thriller writing is hard. I’ve read enough bad ones to know that these ones are the state of the art. I need to finish watching the show. I don’t think I am ever going to read the prequel. 

Oh and I read Virtual Light which has made me itch even more to read the rest of Gibson’s novels.

Of the non-fiction I read, I enjoyed Casino. I don’t tend to read much true crime but things about gangsters or serial killers are normally good to hold my attention for a week or two. I also thoroughly enjoyed Girl in a Band and Please Kill Me. I do like a good rock biography, I read a lot of them as a kid. 

The last highlight I can think of is that we got the last John le Carré novel, Silverview, and it was bloody good. I’ve already written a post about it, but basically; his last few novels indicated that he was going through a renaissance and it makes it all the sadder that he’s dead. I’ll miss him enormously and I am glad I still have more of his fiction to read. More stuff on the list for next year. 

There you have it. Not many goals for next year really. I’ll write if I feel like it but probably won’t. In the meantime I will keep reading because that’s the next best thing. I am going to try to focus a bit on short SFF but there are plenty of novels I’ve had my eye on starting as well. I will be hoping the pandemic is over soon and expecting otherwise. I will probably keep my head under the parapet and hope life doesn’t notice me. 

#onetweetreviews: The Complete Short Stories of J.G. Ballard Volume One

 

I’ve been reading the first volume of J.G. Ballard’s collected short stories and tweeting a mini review of each story as I go along. I got this idea from @M_A_Frasca’s tweet thread about the short stories of Philip K. Dick. I’ve linked my tweet thread above, and if you’d like to follow me or read it on there, go ahead. For those of you who’d rather read it in one body of text (and also to make it a bit more permanent), you can find all the reviews below. I’ll post a similar round up once I am done with the second volume. I have a habit of reading short story collections and immediately forgetting most of the contents; this exercise has helped cement them in my brain, and I intend to do similar for other collections of short stories that I am reading. Watch this space. And be very patient.

Prima Belladonna (1956)

My first Vermillion Sands story. What a setting. And what a list of customer-service no-no’s.

Escapement (1956)

Let’s do the time loop again, with an interesting twist; the person the loop centres on seems to change as the story goes on.

The Concentration City (1957)

Hell is other people. A lot of other people.

Venus Smiles (1957)

Back in the sands. Of all the ways I’ve seen Ballard end the world, this is the funniest.

Manhole 69 (1957)

The best short story title ever, and it has nothing to do with the plot, which has some garbled ideas about what sleep does, physiologically.

Track 12 (1958)

A fun little story about infidelity and murder that is *actually* about how weird audiophiles can be.

The Waiting Grounds (1959)

A first contact story where the contact is at an impossibly abstract remove, and is all the more interesting for it. Ballard lets us use our imaginations here, and all for the better.

Now: Zero (1959)

A horror story with a twist you’ll see coming and yet won’t be able to look away from. If you know of an earlier story with a similar concept, let me know, because otherwise Death Note is a ripoff of this Ballard story.

The Sound Sweep (1960)

A bittersweet story about lost glory and how others can elevate you or let you down badly. Or both, alternately. A lot of Ballard’s future tech has focused on art and the senses so far.

Zone of Terror (1960)

Not just something Pete from Friends says after he gets put in a full body cast; also a story about being manipulated with drugs by a mad doctor (a very Ballard trope that appears here for the first time, I think).

Chronopolis (1960)

A classic be careful what you wish for tale. Some great descriptions of abandoned cities. Ballard often features settings that are outside of time but in this one a society does it to itself. Again, very Ballardian.

The Voices of Time (1960)

A Ballard story about entropy? Colour me surprised. But these are his early workings on these subjects, and they still feel fresh. Evolution obsoleting itself is a great idea explored here in nightmare visions.

The Last World of Mr Goddard (1960)

Sometimes people look big, but really they are sad and little, and they can only conceive of a good world as being sad and little like they are.

Studio 5, The Stars (1961)

Nobody reads poetry, and nobody writes it. It does get produced, though. Some incredibly prescient thoughts RE computers writing creatively. This is probably what will happen. What has happened.

The Deep End (1961)

What a metaphor. Am always intrigued by these drought filled Ballard stories considering our oceans are inching upwards.

The Overloaded Man (1961)

This is your brain on Barthes.

Mr. F is Mr. F (1961)

What.

Billenium (1961)

Hell is still other people. Ballard says an awful lot with this compact space.

The Gentle Assassin (1961)

One of those “everything has already happened” time travel capers, but none the less tragic or effective for it, imo.

The Insane Ones (1962)

I’m as suspicious of psychiatry as the next guy but oof. This is the like the other side of a lot of William S. Burroughs’ ideas.

The Garden of Time (1962)

The prettiest Ballard I’ve read yet and the least substantial, but that might be my smooth brain. Big Michael Moorcock vibes (he’s always writing about counts and dukes and stuff).

The Thousand Dreams of Stellavista (1962)

A gothic horror story from Ballard’s psychedelic science fiction setting Vermillion Sands. Goes even further than the madwoman in the attic trope to suggest that the attic *is* the madwoman. A really good one, this.

Thirteen to Centaurus (1962)

If there’s one thing I like about Ballard, it’s that he’s not too sophisticated to balk at an obvious twist, but he’s sophisticated enough to always go at least one step further. This generation ship story is ace.

Passport to Eternity (1962)

Forget dreams within dreams, Ballard gives us a vacation from a vacation.

The Cage of Sand (1962)

I wonder if Elon Musk has read this story.

The Watch-towers (1962)

This story gave me strong Half-Life 2 vibes. The final image is incredibly arresting.

The Singing Statues (1962)

Being in love with a narcissist really sucks, trust me.

The Man on the 99th Floor (1962)

Very PKD. My advice if yr in an SF story is never let anyone hypnotise you.

The Subliminal Man (1963)

They live, we sleep. A scary story that only gets scarier when you realise how much more pernicious modern advertising is than this comically overblown example.

The Reptile Enclosure (1963)

Ballard knows how to create a final image, even if some of the lead up is a bit weak.

A Question of Re-Entry (1963)

By turns very dated and a cutting indictment of our meddling with other cultures.

The Time-Tombs (1963)

You don’t have to bake these ancient tapes.

Now Wakes the Sea (1963)

Ballard does love his enigmatic women. And the relativity of time. Have read enough of these now that I am starting to see them as… Ballardian.

The Venus Hunters (1963)

The last story used whacky fantasy symbols for the unconscious, and this one tears those sorts of stories apart. Some range. Feels contemporarily post-truth.

End-Game (1963)

What a metaphor… nobody outsmarts the committee.

Minus One (1963)

This’d be funny if it wasn’t scary. Very Shutter Island.

The Sudden Afternoon (1963)

This premise didn’t thrill me when I saw Behind Her Eyes and it didn’t thrill me reading this story. A weak one. Sorry.

The Screen Game (1963)

Do like these Vermillion Sands stories, even if they are all the same (mysterious woman engages in weird art form, clueless man gets his fingers burned).

Time of Passage (1964)

A simple story told in a devastating way. It made me wonder when his wife died. It was the year he wrote this story.

Some Thoughts on Wodehouse’s Carry on, Jeeves

Every Jeeves and Wooster story is the same. Bertie Wooster selects an item of clothing for himself. Jeeves tries telling him that it’s a fashion crime. Bertie stands up to him. Then Bertie is contacted by a friend or relative who is in some kind of fix. Sometimes Bertie comes up with his own scheme, sometimes he asks Jeeves and he comes up with one. Either way, hijinks.

Carry on, Jeeves by P.G. Wodehouse

Every Jeeves and Wooster story is the same. Bertie Wooster selects an item of clothing for himself. Jeeves tries telling him that it’s a fashion crime. Bertie stands up to him. Then Bertie is contacted by a friend or relative who is in some kind of fix. Sometimes Bertie comes up with his own scheme, sometimes he asks Jeeves and he comes up with one. Either way, hijinks. The scheme does not go according to plan, but leads to a good outcome nobody expected. Jeeves is revealed to have masterfully manipulated the whole thing. In a fit of contrition, Bertie swears never to wear a powder blue suit (or similar) again.

There’s nothing wrong with formula. In fact, in an uncertain world, formula is comforting. I’ve read some Wodehouse before and found it a bit tough to get in to in the sense that I find it difficult to care about the problems of people who truly have no problems. Wodehouse gets away with the formulaic stories and the characters that are tough to care about because he is a damn good writer. He just writes good sentences. It’s that simple. He’s very funny and very playful. I needed something a bit lighter hearted after reading The Stand and then reading a gritty western, and some Wodehouse did the trick.

The whole “problems for people who have no problems” thing means that the Wodehouse novel I read (Stiff Upper Lip, Jeeves) dragged a bit. The setup for the mystery took a long time and watching Bertie dig himself further and further in to trouble just got tiresome. The payoff, seeing how Jeeves has manipulated events, was worth it, but only just. Carry on, Jeeves, is a collection of short stories, and this format suits the formula better, I think. The setups are simpler and the payoffs quicker. You don’t get too much time to wonder at just how stupid Bertie can be. I mean, I know that’s the point, but I don’t have to find it amusing.

All of the stories have run together in my mind. The one that stands out is Bertie Changes His Mind, and that’s because it’s narrated by Jeeves, not Bertie; it’s the only Jeeves and Wooster story told from this perspective. This makes me really sad, although I suppose Wodehouse had to stick to his winning formula, and novelty does go a long way. Jeeves is always a mysterious, ethereal figure, so seeing him bumming around smoking a cigarette while he thinks on his next move, and getting some of his unfiltered thoughts about Bertie, makes for a truly great story.

I don’t have too much else to say. Wodehouse isn’t style over substance; style is the substance. But it’s a very readable style. At least I enjoyed the short stories a bit more than the novel I read. I have a copy of The Code of the Woosters that I am going to try and then I’ll feel like I’ve given Wodehouse a pretty fair go. I want to have at least considered a writer that a lot of people seem to rate. I talk about giving up books I am not enjoying and then take three books to realise I don’t like someone. Well, sometimes it’s nicer to have read something, than to read something.

Some Thoughts on William S. Burroughs’ Exterminator!

I’ve been fond of William S. Burroughs for a long time but never got around to reading any of his short fiction. The library had a copy of Exterminator!, and I decided to pick it up and see what Burroughs was like out of the cut-up novel he’s most known for. I quickly realised that any distinction between his short fiction and his experimental novels is arbitrary at best.

Burroughs’ short stories are not discreet; the same events are recalled from different perspectives, timelines bleed together, characters disappear and reappear in different stories. Exterminator! was apparently marketed as a novel, so this makes sense. If it wasn’t for the page breaks and the titles, this would really just be a standard Burroughs novel.

And I do mean standard. Like, there’s lots of babbling about mixing the image track and the sound track, lots of sexual psychoses, plenty of seedy unhinged characters flitting about in a shadowy world. Unmistakably Burroughs, but it is a bit less coherent than even the most messed up and cut up of his other works, and this feeling is only increased by the fact that the two strongest stories in Exterminator! are the most discreet, coherent ones.

“The Discipline of DE” is an odd little story about a retired colonel that decides to start living in the moment. It has such a pleasant, even tone that it’s hard to believe it’s Burroughs; it could be right out of a self-help manual. And then it hits you. This *is* a self-help manual, in the guise of a short story; Burroughs’ DE (Do Easy) is just a mindfulness practice. If you’ve ever read that you should take your time while you brush your teeth and really focus on how it feels, then you’ll be familiar with the kinds of practices that Burroughs is describing. Don’t think it’s just boring and didactic though, there’s plenty of odd interjections about not spilling tea on the duchess, and an exploration of the idea that DE might make a good gunfighter. This story has an odd charm all of its own, but there’s an adaption of this story that’s only about nine minutes long, and is well worth your time.

The other story in Exterminator! that really stands out is “The ‘Priest’ they Called Him”. An archetypal Burroughs story about a desperate junky looking for a fix, but with a sweet twist; this is a Christmas story, and the ‘Priest’ charitably gives up his fix to help out a neighbour in need. This is one of my favourite Christmas stories, and I was familiar with it before I read Exterminator!, because what lead me to Burroughs?

Nirvana, and Kurt Cobain in particular, who collaborated with Burroughs on an excellent recording of the story that you can listen to below.

I need to read more Burroughs. I haven’t read Queer yet, and I’ve only read the first of The Red Night Trilogy. When I get around to it I’ll let you know. In the meantime, if you like Burroughs, go read Exterminator!, particularly if you’re in the mood for some self-help, or a nice Christmas tale. I know, right?

Some Thoughts on Philip K Dick’s Short Stories

As you probably know, I’m very fond of Philip K. Dick, fond enough that I intend to read everything he published, and in that vein I have been working my way through his collected short stories. I just finished the third of five volumes and had a few thoughts I wanted to share.

I read the first three volumes of PKD’s short stories over the course of about three years. At first I wasn’t conscious of it, but now I think that I am kinda taking my time over it because I will, eventually, have read all of them. And I really like the short stories! So I don’t want to exhaust them too quickly.

Not that I’ve been reading them in strict order. My first encounter with his short stories was a collection of his more famous (made into films) ones. So I read Minority Report, We Can Remember It for You, Faith of our Fathers, and some others that slip my mind now. I knew then that I’d want to read all of them.

The short story suits PKD really well. I recently read The Simulacra, a novel of his that perfectly exemplifies the weaker PKD novels. In short, the weaker ones tend to be unfocused; to have a lot of interesting ideas but to not develop more than a couple of them in any interesting way. They’re still worth reading, because the ideas are still great, and you can still run with them a bit yourself, but the singularity of vision isn’t there. The constraints of a short story force PKD to focus on one or two ideas closely and develop them towards the conclusion of the story, and in terms of ideas this makes the really great PKD stories as good as the novels if not better, because there is less fluff.

Not that every PKD short story is a masterpiece, of course, but I feel like the form suits his strengths as writer, and masks his weaknesses. He still ends up relying on the framework of “everyman oppressed by modern technology/society” to hang a lot of his stories on, and not all of them hit the mark. The best PKD stories normally manage to exhibit, if not hope, then at least some other way, some other direction that we might take. The worst ones, like the story Sales Pitch in the collection I just read, don’t really manage to say anything except that advertising is bad. A story in the same collection, The Chromium Fence, has a similar structure and even a similar ending, but the protagonist arrives at it in a way that there is always space for freedom, even if that space is in your own head.

I don’t mind a downer, no-hope story, but I’d prefer it if there’s a bit of nuance, and this is what we find in the story Foster, You’re Dead. It’s the same basic idea as in Sales Pitch, “advertising is bad and pernicious, and is becoming more so every day”. But in Foster…, PKD takes this idea and takes it further, adds nuance and character. It’s not just advertising that’s bad, but capitalism itself, and how it inevitable shifts the military industrial complex into the home. It’s not just the effect it has on you, because even if you can ignore it, and not mind the peer pressure, maybe your spouse or your kids can’t. This story is fantastic demonstration of how fundamentally evil it is that they play adverts for life insurance on kids TV.

The third volume of PKD’s short stories also has some fantastic examples of how good he was at writing mousetrap stories. I love stories that close on you with a snap in the last couple of sentences (I mean, I often end up writing them), so reading someone who can invert an entire story like PKD can is always a pleasure. Shell Game and Misadjustment are great examples of this, and I think Shell Game is now one of my favourite PKD stories. If you’ve heard that PKD is the literature of paranoia and you’re interested, give Shell Game a try.

I’m sad I’ve only got two more volumes of PKD’s stories to go. I have the fourth volume and haven’t purchased the fifth one yet, so I should be able to string this pleasure out for another year or so before I have to re-read. I still have a bunch of his novels to go, so that’s something at least.

Hole in the Sky is Now Cheaper!

If you don’t have my collection of short stories yet, then now is the perfect time to get your copy. The print edition is now only £3.50, and the Kindle edition is still only 99p.

If you’re not sure, you could always try a couple of the stories for free right here, on my site.

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